So I've been trying to find the final look of the comic, and I just can't get anything that I am crazy about. I actually like the looseness and the vitality of the roughs, and I'm finding that every time I clean up the drawings, they lose a lot of life. I got so frustrated, that I decided to forget about the line work for now, and try to work on the color. Here is a test I did today during my lunch break.
And here are some figures from todays gesture drawing class: